The Journey to Axe Island
the journey to Axe island was so tiring, yet Thom and Elenna Were buzzing with excitement not knowing what was to await them.
Whenever the friends were together they knew with their skills and courage, anything was possible. As they tiptoed to the thick, dark forest the deadly silence filled their ears. As they shivered around the corner the mysterious catbat beast known as scar was ready to pounce. Tom and tummy's were filled with butterflies
Out of the corner of their eyes, a black figure swooped in and out of the trees. Scar! The brave friends stood still with fear. Worried yet excitedly, they crouched. around the beasts neck hung the golden key. It was shining in the moonlight. Elenna used her wicked archery skills to shoot the arrow at scar to free the key. Their hearts were beating like drums. Suddenly, scars beady eye flickered, had scar seen the friends? They would have to go different ways for their devious plan to work.
Thought I would share it because I thought it was brill seeing as this is his first ever real story on paper instead of imagination and reality mix up :)
He still has major issues with writing but this was produced on clicker 6 that I mentioned before. Thanks to that he is now reading every day at school and has gone from spelling nothing to passing his 50 word target to 86 spelling words :)
All in 3 months!
I will bow out again now too much going on in RL so random postings at mo hence silly oclock replies
Hope you are all ok and hugs to those who are not xx
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A short story by DS
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