Have been putting off getting flyers printed for my little business for a while. Anyway am doing it now just as my regular proofreader (my mum!) is away on holiday.
The main phrase on the flyer is "Bespoke buttercream cakes as individual as you" - for some reason this isn't sitting right with me. I feel like it should be "as individual as you are", but that also sounds wrong?
So which should it be?
Also: "Call us or email your order and we will create your perfect cake" - sounds crap right? "Call or email your order..."?
Ugh, don't know what has happened to me today!
TIA
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Quick help please - am making a flier
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BreeVDKamp · 08/07/2014 13:51
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