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anyone feeling a little verbally creative?

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mckenzie · 13/11/2012 21:23

I need a little poem to go inside my god daughter's birthday card. I've bought her a magazine subscription for her birthday and the first magazine won't arrive for a few weeks yet. So i've been trying to think of a short ditty (she's only 8) to explain that her present is coming soon but it won't only be one present, they'll be eleven more to follow over the year.
Anyone feeling creative to help me? TIA

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MoonlightandRoses · 13/11/2012 22:32

Now you're eight
I know you'll understand that your present isn't late
It's just taking a different shape.
Every month in this here year
A part of the present will arrive, never fear
Sent with love from me to you
To help you pass the time, until you are nine.

Well, it's a start - I am sure someone with rather more verbal dexterity will be along shortly!

P.S. - Might be worth re-posting your request in the _Chat or Creative Writing topics too.

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mckenzie · 14/11/2012 08:51

thanks very much moonlight. Much appreciated. I will re-post in the other topics though for more ideas if that's ok with you?

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MoonlightandRoses · 14/11/2012 21:10

Absolutely! Hope you get some nice ditties in.

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