A thread for critiquing each other's work

[Nokidsnoproblem]

Hello all!

This thread is for people to review/critique each other's work.

There are no set rules as of yet. Please discuss individual rules/requirements with the person whom you are dealing with.

All works/levels/genres welcome!

Post what you want critiqued/ reviewed below, or post what kind of things you would like to critique! :)

[Nokidsnoproblem]

I am an amateur novelist and do not have anything published yet.

I have just finished 2 novels and I am looking for feedback/ criticism.

Book #1 is a dystopian novel aimed at teenagers (75,000 words)

Book #2 is a fictional novel about feminism and anxiety (62,000 words)

If you would be willing to have a look at either of these texts then please reply below, or DM me. You don't have to read the full novel if you don't have time.

[Nokidsnoproblem]

Also, I am free to critique work. I especially like reading realism/ naturalism, but I am happy to review anything! DM me if you have something you'd like an unbiased perspective on.

[InMySpareTime]

I'm happy to critique work, I've self-published one book and had a second one published (I helped a friend start a publishing company!)
My third book is off to print in the next week or so (awaiting cover art), but I'll be back writing in June once the DCs are back at school.

[JohnFarleysRuskin]

Hi Nokids, I just mailed you.

[charleylarlie]

Hi, I am currently editing a memoir (reads like a novel) and it'd be great to have somebody to swap chapters with for mutual critique. If anybody is interested, please reply below or message me.

I have a bit of experience of critiquing, and I'm happy to read any genre except sci fi or supernatural, as I don't really read enough of them to feel I'd be any use to advise on plot etc.