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Anyone fancy critiquing 1st episode of a comedy?

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Thisisaeuphemism · 22/10/2013 10:22

Am looking for feedback on my scriptwriting. I've written a ten-part comedy for TV but I'm really struggling with that tricky first episode.
I'm happy to look at people's mss. in return...
Do get in touch.

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gaggiagirl · 22/10/2013 15:20

Sounds exciting!. who is your target audience?

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bunnybing · 22/10/2013 19:07

Hi yes I would be happy to have a look at it. Can you say roughly what kind of comedy?
If you could look at 2 chapters of my mss that would be fab.

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Thisisaeuphemism · 23/10/2013 09:00

It is exciting - until I remind myself how competitive it is out there and how the odds are against me. Still it is fun writing it, and far more fun than writing novels, I have to say!

Target audience, hmm, probably women, mostly, between 20 and 70. Casting my net wide!

Bunnybing, at the moment, its a non-funny comedy. No, er, I don't really know what kind it is. I will pm you with email address.

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ImperialBlether · 24/11/2013 21:27

Want me to look at it too? I've an MA in Creative Writing, not that that means a bloody thing! I've written a couple of books but have had a go at script writing.

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Thisisaghostlyeuphemism · 26/11/2013 11:31

Hi Imperial, I've just seen this. Fab. I'll pm you, cheers

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DrinkFeckArseGirls · 03/12/2013 16:52

You wrote 10 episodes! Envy Congrats.

I've written, erm 3 pages of the first episode. It's like pulling off my nails. I have a 2 week deadline to finish the episode, that includes the re-writes...

All the best with your oeuvre!

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Thisisaghostlyeuphemism · 05/01/2014 20:56

Hey drinkfeck, how's the writing going?

Did you submit to writers room in the end?

I'm waiting for details of 'the next sitcom mission' - another goal to aim at sigh.

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